Writing Compelling Admission Essays

College admission essays serve multiple purposes in your application. They allow admissions officers to get to know you beyond your grades and test scores, understand your personality and values, and assess your writing skills. Your essay should reveal something meaningful about who you are, what you value, and how you think. It's your opportunity to stand out from other applicants with similar academic credentials.

Select a topic that is: • Personally meaningful to you • Specific and focused (avoid broad topics) • Reveals your character and values • Shows growth or learning • Demonstrates your unique perspective Avoid topics that are: • Overly common (sports injury, mission trip, death of a grandparent) • Controversial or potentially offensive • Focused on someone else rather than you • Listing achievements already mentioned elsewhere • Complaining or making excuses

Strong essays typically include: • A compelling opening that hooks the reader • Specific details and examples rather than generalizations • Reflection on experiences and what you learned • Your authentic voice and personality • A clear structure with smooth transitions • A meaningful conclusion that ties everything together Writing Process: • Brainstorm multiple ideas before choosing one • Write several drafts • Show, don't tell (use specific examples) • Get feedback from teachers, counselors, or trusted adults • Proofread carefully for grammar and spelling errors